Stephen
Ratcliffe's newest book Portraits & Repetition is
not for the weak-patienced reader. The book, a series of 474
consecutively dated, obscure portraits of the famed North
Coastal poet-town Bolinas, Ca., is the beginnings of
Ratcliffe's magnum opus, one systematically charting shape,
color and action as sound.
Certainly,
one first takes notice the book's title as an exact derivative
of Gertrude Stein's well-known lecture. Indeed, the poetics
Ratcliffe enacts in P & R is driven by, rather ::in
dialogue with:: or ::an extension of:: this lecture, as
foundation.
[E]ach
time there was a difference just a difference enough so that
it could go on and be a present something. Oh yes you all do
understand. You understand this. You see that in order to do
this there must be no remembering, remembering is
repetition, remembering is also confusion. (Stein,
"Portraits and Repetition," 106)
But
let us not be confused though, by remembering Stein's
immediate, concentrated doses of repetition. Ratcliffe's
exploits are deeply informed by Stein's investigations into
repetition and, ultimately, the essence of things,
however Ratcliffe asks a different set of questions and P
& R ravels a new set of explanations.
Formally,
Ratcliffe's portraits adhere to a five couplet structure
[making for a quick read] with each couplet containing a
parenthetic word [generally underlined]; each couplet also
being self-contained in that it is a single unit: an
observation, thought-utterance, breath-line::perhaps a
sentence in the portrait as paragraph:: yet paragraph may be
an ill-suited word for Ratcliffe's portraits. Too, contained
within themselves, by date--if for no other reason, the
portraits are more two-dimensional substitutes for
three-dimensional grids than they are paragraphs/poems. And
like Stein's portraits, Ratcliffe's rely on rich color
and objectified pastoral/action/sound notation, often blended
with brief philosophical commentary/discourse, to get to the
essence of things.
feeling
in color for instance blood, image reversed (is)
as
if sound approaches the fence between house and street
edge
of sun through green distance (where) blue passes above
shape
of tree, memory of a bird landing and/or leaving it
woman
behind grid of tones whose right arm extends to corner
(picture)
on the wall of invisible action perhaps, or not
object
seen, its thought therefore continued into the middle
distance
in which the body at the table isn't (different)
(that)
starting with what's written, hear where a sound goes
after
the telephone rings and the person leaves a message
("12.17,"
312)
All
given, it should not be surprising that Ratcliffe,
characteristic of earlier works [as well as Stein's], also
theoretically draws from the arts' most visible media
::theatre, film, painting, sculpture, etc.:: to chart
movement: sight and sound.
song
of birds again in front of the weather, "Who's
there?"
in
response to the play's seen but unspoken action (here)
(76)
Despite
the common poetic ground Stein and Ratcliffe share, there are
[obviously] evident, fundamental differences to approach and
product. So let us say, Ratcliffe's is macro-method to Stein's
micro-method.
While
Stein's portraits and meditations were narrowly concerned with
particular objects [a red hat, potatoes, a room, etc.] or
persons [Matisse, Picasso, etc.], pronouns, etc., Ratcliffe
works from a broader sense of object ::existence of place and
its activities as thing:: and in doing so P & R
records the daily essence of things being/constructing
Ratcliffe's Bolinas. The inclusiveness of Ratcliffe's method
opens to unlimited essence (afterall, WCW died at work on his
sixth book capturing the essence of Paterson).
Because
P & R embodies a larger object's essence ::a
larger, more complex essence:: its usage of repetition becomes
disparate and less poignant in relation to Stein's; only when
the essence of a particular time and space shares similar
essence of another particular time and space does P & R
exercise repetitive technique. If the rapid-fire reiterations
employed by Stein may be considered micro-repetition,
Ratcliffe's then is of a macro-repetitious nature. Here,
Ratcliffe's collection refines Steinian methodology and by
doing so creates unique emotional provocations. It is not
until the reader has digested a considerable mass of P & R
before the repetitions of movement/color/action/sound/essence
be experienced in full. When that time finally arrives the
mind conjures images resembling those Ratcliffe constructed in
earlier portraits and remembers. During these moments ::as
Stein lectured:: confusion certainly accosts the mind and a
sense of deja vu overwhelms. This is indeed a remarkable,
uncanny achievement! No writer or collection in my experience
has manifested such a strange, emotive phenomenon. And yet
amidst these moments, Stein's arguments against the existence
of repetition haunt, and it seems the path leads back to the
beginning :
:where
Ratcliffe's investigation started:
I
began to wonder at at about this time just what one saw when
one looked at anything really looked at anything. Did one
see sound, and what was the relation between color and
sound, did it make itself by description by a word that
meant it or did it make itself by a word in itself.
-Gertrude
Stein, "Portraits and Repetition"
[epigraph from Portraits & Repetition]
1Stein,
Gertrude. "Portraits and Repetition," Writings and
Lectures: 1909-1945, ed. Patricia Meyerowitz (London: Penguin,
1971), 106.